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Thin layer

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Diego<3
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    26 Jun 12
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Blurb These are going to be poems (i rly dnt care if they suck) just about how I feel
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1. A thin layer (repetitive poem)

A thin layer is how far away I am,

Away from isolation,

A thin layer is how far away I am,

Away from torture,

A thin layer is how far away I am,

Away from them,

A thin layer is how far away I am,

Away from myself,

A thin layer is how far away I am,

But something makes me go on,

 

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  • Peace & DonutsThese are so so good but poor u u sound so depressed :'( movella hug :)
    Diego<3Life is tough
    But once you get round the obstacles
    You're somewhere new
  • Emmy ErlsI really do love this poem. It makes me think about life and about the obstacles in your way :).
    Diego<3thank you
  • D.B. FairlessThere's obvious sadness here, a clear meaning, but the ending seems optimistic, fighting through the tough times because you know you'll be a better person. I would have wished this to be longer, maybe show your transcendence, but it is very good, shows your maturity :)
    Diego<3In future poems I might make them a bit longer but sometimes I find short is the easy way of getting out your emotions...
  • Prince Jang 현승I'm glad you're writing this. Hopefully it'll help get things off your chest. You're a great person, and you may not believe it, but I hope one day you'll realise it. My words may not mean much, but I want you to know that we are listening, you're not ignored and you are definitely not alone in this world.
    Diego<3:') You are one of the most understanding people I have ever met. And I believe that I am not alone because you too are alone but as we are both alone that's what makes us stronger, our future may last longer.
    So thank you for being who you are.
    amazing author
    But most of all; amazing friend
    You may be older than me, you may not have ever seen me but I find that is the best way to be friends with someone.
    Cause that way they will always listen. No matter what.
    Diego<3now I wish you a good night :)
    Prince Jang 현승I'm glad I can be here for you. It's the lease I can do. You're a genuine person, and you deserve to be happy, you really do. Don't ever think that you deserve sadness because you really don't.
    You're one of a kind, a really good writer, humourous and you should always stay true to yourself.
    Good night to you too^^ sweet dreams, and I hope you'll be able to clear your mind, because tomorrow is a new day.
    Diego<3Today a girl in my class announced something serious... I mean, I've had thoughts but I'd never announce something like it...
    She announced that she was going to commit suicide...
    It was stupid if she actually wanted to do it because people know and so they can stop her now...
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