Sorry

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IceCreamGirl
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  • Published:
    17 Jun 12
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Blurb Helen cannot escape Taylor and her endless taunts. Taylor cannot escape herself and the monster she has become.
Approx 28 minutes to read


Sorry

1. 1:Helen-A new start

I crammed my things into my bag, my books crumpled in messy piles in my hurry to get to school. Only my Art project I put carefully in a folder and placed right at the back, so that it wouldn't get creased. I needed to get to school before Taylor, then I could hide out in form all morning. 

I stopped to check myself in the mirror. I had brushed my hair and put it up in a high ponytail, to keep it out of the way. It was my only vain feature. I loved it, the almost white colour, it's silky smoothness and the feel of it flowing down my back like a waterfall. I had managed to grow it down to my hips now, and refused to let anyone trim more than half a centimetre off. But I hated my milk-pale skin. I had put on a light coat of mascara and a little eye-shadow for a change. Maybe if I looked popular and confident, she'd leave me alone. But somehow I knew it wouldn't matter if I looked like a model, she'd still treat me just the same. My body was slender and tall, but with gangly limbs which meant I was hopeless at sports or co-ordination, but I kept in shape. I'd attempted gymnastics over the summer, done a few small competitions, though I was still waiting for the results. Maybe a medal would show her I'm not useless.

I downed a mouthful of orange juice from the carton and ran outside to where the early bus was waiting. I jumped on board and sat down on an empty seat, away from everyone else. No-one from school was up this early, but I disliked being near strangers. It creeped me out when they sat too close to me, or breathed really loudly. I've never been sure why. I popped a Mento in my mouth and chewed, my new equivalent of brushing my teeth. I hardly ever ate breakfast any more, it wasted time and I was fine without. It was the first day of the Summer term, and I was determined to escape her. I had to get up at six, but it was worth it to avoid her.

I leant back into the hard scratchy seat and relaxed. I appreciated the few minutes of peace on the jerky bus, before it arrived outside the school. I got off, thanking the driver, and hurried into school, constantly checking over my shoulder. I prayed that this time I was early enough to avoid them, then I could escape to my form room and stay there until the end of the day. Under the teacher's watchful eye I knew I'd be fine.

I sped through the corridors and got to my locker. I pulled out my art project, to get it safely inside so that no-one could ruin it. I'd spent weeks on it. I had painstakingly sketched out each picture, then coloured in them all with my new oil pastels. I'd spent hours on the research and finding just the right pictures to comment on then draw out. I was trying to impress my new Art teacher, Mrs Gaskell and wanted to show her what I could do.

But while I was cramming it in my locker, I suddenly heard laughter echoing through the corridors behind me.

 

Comments (104)

  • Summer-louise HoranU shud make a sequel
    IceCreamGirlLots of people said that XD I have no idea how though. Y'know, considering they're both dead... :)
  • dark lunatouching (the ending) it made me cry D;
    IceCreamGirlEveryone is saying that :D I'm so glad you liked it (or at least, it was emotional for you) and thanks for reading.
  • aka24omg, this is amazing i agree with MoonAvis i felt the story it engaged the readers loved it, could read it over again, it made me cry. if u hve time wuld u mind checking out my book "Young Life" its based on a true story, thnx.
    IceCreamGirlThank you so much! And of course I will :D
  • MoonAviswowowowow this is so amazing! And what makes it even better is that we get to know both the characters. I didn't just read your movella, I felt it! Brilliant! :)
    MoonAvisaww thanks! Can't wait to read more from you! :D
    IceCreamGirlReally? Well, I'd better get writing then...
    So you liked the emotional type of movella?
    MoonAvisI LOVED the emotional type of movella <3 But it's not like I won't admire comic, or perhaps suspense types? I am really looking forward to it...But of course, only if you have time... ;)
    IceCreamGirlOkay, that's very helpful, thanks! XD I've got an action one planned, something I don't do much of, but I'll try and start an emotionally-type thing soon :) Thank you!
  • SariaAdelahThis is a very well written and intriguing story. I think what makes it so interesting is the fact you give both sides of the story, in such a way that makes the reader empathise with both Taylor and Helen. I like the fact that Taylor isn't just some totally heartless bitch, and that we get clear glimpses of her conscience. You are a very good author.
    IceCreamGirlThank you! Sorry, I only just noticed this :) Yes, I wanted to get both opinions across. I'm so glad that you think so :D
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