The London Riots - A Wreckage

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SlenderMan_
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    29 May 12
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Blurb My entry into the 'write the riots' competition held not long ago by Movellas and another site. Hope you like it :)
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Category:
Realism
Rating:
Approx 2 minutes to read


The London Riots - A Wreckage

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The night was still as I wandered the deserted streets. Shattered glass and debris camouflaged the roads and paths, a crazed and wild world I’d never seen.  This place - in which I had spent my entire life – wasn’t much, but it was home. To see it crumble to pieces had struck something inside me, something I didn’t know I had until now. An untouched emotion, something I hadn’t experienced before. I hadn’t asked for this, they didn’t think of me when they burned the place down. They didn’t think of the children who watched from a shattered window, petrified of the monsters that roamed before them. They didn’t think of the shop-owners or the people who lived above them. Where would they go, what would they do? The crackle of the raging fire was all to be heard. Smoke swallowed the sky in thick black clouds and filled my nose with a sharp aroma.   

I stopped in my tracks and picked up a metal frame from a pile of debris. The glass had been smashed completely and a thick layer of soot covered the photo that would tell a story I wouldn’t understand. I wiped the soot away with my sleeve and stared at the photo – a mother and child. They looked poorer than me but their smiles showed perseverance, showed utter love for each other. My heart lurched with sympathy, our community had been destroyed. Yes, we want better homes and jobs but what good does it do to destroy what little we had? Now, we have nothing. I took the photo from the frame and tucked it into my pocket, if I ever found these people; I would give it to them and tell them that life isn’t worth living without someone to love.   

Chucking the frame away, I slowly walked towards a burning store.  The glass had been blown out and was now scattered across the pavement. I stood and watched it glow as the flames gradually crept up the sides of the building. The scene, a rampant menace, burned wildly, bright colours blinded me and the smell of smoke reached my nose once more in a rapid wave. I watched it engulf the rest of the building, swallowing the remains of a home – nothing but memories now. A tear fell down my cheek as I watched. That mother and child could have lived here, this could have been their home, and now, only wreckage stood cloaked in flames.   

 

Comments (17)

  • AutumnFyreThis is amazing! I love "shattered glass and debris camouflaged the roads and paths" You have described the feelings perfectly and in the description you have used all the senses which are usually forgotten. Well done! Please have a look at my movella "Forever Flawed" which I have entered for the bullying competition. Here's the link: movellas.com/en/book/read/20120516204502..
    SlenderMan_Thank you for your comment!
    Yeah sure I will check it out! Could you check out my entry for the bullying competition too? Here's the link: movellas.com/en/book/read/20120528222427..
  • Jay Dwow. this was insane. Inasane. Inasasnasanasne. The way you captured every sense, sight, emotion, and weaved it together with the intricacy of a tibetan rug (Whatsoever that may be) is captivating. I just couldn't stopreading. And could you take a look at "Legends of teh Atlands", a movella of mine?
    SlenderMan_Awh thank you so much! And course I will! Could you read Trapped for me?
  • A Candid ConfinementOk, I really loved it, really well written, don't know what to say, very little to judge upon, but comes a diary entry more than anything liked :)

    Wld you like to read my movella "Armageddon" and would you care to comment.
    SlenderMan_Thank you! And yeah sure! Could you also read my story called Trapped? Would appreciate your comments.
  • angelleyesI especially love this piece of writing and your runner up position was well deserved. To be able to capture the emotions of the riots and create that imagery for the reader is an outstanding achievement especially when you were not actually there.

    As for not writing about not writing about it because people died I think that is naive. Many events happen throughout history which provide great stories and help for people's memories to live on. Just because something is tragic does not mean it should not be written about. You just have to look at Titanic, the Holocaust and the twin towers to see that this is how we remember those people and what they experienced.

    Well done Jodie keep on writing from real life you capture it so well.
    SlenderMan_Thank you :) and I agree
    XxJessxXThat's why I'm moving to Canada since there's no gangs
  • XxJessxXThis was a tremendous display... In my opinion I don't think we should write about this since some people did die, could be family members and i'm sure everyone will agree with me saying
    "This should be forgotten"
    anyone else agree?
    SlenderMan_It was for a competition
    XxJessxXYeah I think the competition end D:
    but never the less this was amazingly created :D
    SlenderMan_yes the competition did end, I simply wanted to share my entry.
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