Life

by
DarrenJ
  • Published:
    8 May 12
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Blurb My life and people can hopefully relate. x
Plot keywords:
life reality
Category:
Poetry
Rating:
Approx 1 minutes to read


Life

2. Life

 

life is what you make of it i hear a million times but people without problems never realise the pain inside people like me hide being too scared too speak out aloud    
 

Comments (1)

  • deltabravoYour poem does have a meaningful expression but I suggest you wok out a better format, may be in one chapter, break it in some pattern, rhyme it if possible and it will surely work. You can have a look at my poems and share your comments . keep writing.
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