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Diary of, well ........

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XNieko
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    8 Apr 12
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Blurb Diaries, every darn one of them only ever contains feeling, secrets,and life. Phft, not this, in fact this is not even a diary, It is a blackmail journal, as I like to name this useless paper bound in a leather cover. If you say "this has secrets written in it" then you are very wrong because I would be very happy to read out these secrets in public. In the end what do I have to loose I not the one who got myself into their situations, I merely just find them because their not good enough to keep their secrets secret enough...
Plot keywords:
hate, blackmail, secrets, family, whispers, brothers, fear
Category:
Diary
Rating:
Approx 5 minutes to read


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1. 24th april 1864

 

I am actually not quite sure why I am writing in this journal nothing too exiting does happen in my life. And anyway whatever I am to write in here will probably end up being read by older brother  Nicholas whom I tell most my secrets anyway.

That is only if you don't know the truth or I should rather say want to know the truth. To tell you the truth there actually is no truth and even if there was one why would I write it down in this journal only to be read by some random whom I do not even know.

And anyway every diary/journal that I have ever laid eyes upon, 17 to be exact I just happen to belong to a very large family and I also just happen to be very talented at the art slyness (not pick pocketing) as I was saying they always have secret held deep within, that only the person them self knows and well, me.

Who is Me I hear you wonder?

Do you seriously wish to know?

Well I am the evil mastermind that rules over your life controlling every bad deed you do...

Only joking although I Am War Pigeon.

Ok fine I am Julius Vanhove son of Nathan Vanhove (a well known, very wealthy and highly honoured family). I am eighteen years old and am in my last year of school at Eton College. I have an older Brother named Nicholas Vanhove who is twenty and two years old and is training to be a Barrister. I guess you say that I am quite close to my brother; we actually do look very alike and most people misjudge us and think that we are twins. But we most certainly are not (thank God) to tell you the truth I am probably the better looking brother.

I think there is a cat in my bureau.

Okay that was weird I actually just wrote out what I was thinking.

Anyway as I was writing, that is actually all you do really need to know about me and my family. I could tell you everyone’s secretes but that would be rude. And plus I am saving those secretes to be used as blackmail.

There really is not any more to write about me other than the fact that I am actually the Queen’s personal messenger who knows everything that must be kept hidden such as the secret affair she is having. By thunder I cannot believe I just told you my secret truth.

I guess I shall just have to burn this journal and banish its existence from the face of this sinful Earth.

What a waste of good paper.

Am i really who i say I am.

Goodbye Journal...   

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  • azzoviYou introduced everyone in a damn different style...it so good
    XNiekoWhy, thank you.
  • azzovihe read mine movellas.com/en/book/read/20120418211916..
    this is for the compeition...
    do check it and suggest me
  • azzoviwow!!!!
  • WhitmanI'm not sure what to make of this! It feels more like a writing exercise than a story at the moment. Are you writing any more?
    XNiekoI actually have an idea of what i should do now. And i think that i will write more using your advice and this has really helped giving me a proper foundation to work on.
    (big thanks)
    WhitmanHappy to help. I look forward to seeing what you've come up with!
    XNiekoOne little problem though. Well this is a character that i am actually using in a book that i am writing (with pen and paper) and i wanted to use him for this competition, but the problem is that i do not want to reveal too much of him in this piece so what do you think i should do to improve but not reveal too much at the same time.
    WhitmanJust write about something that doesn't relate directly to the plot of your novel. You could write a prologue, an episode from his past, this could just be his embarrassing teenage diary. I'm doing something similar at the moment with Freak House, my own novel project. What I've written so far, while the aim is to write self-contained stories, largely serves as character and setting exploration, which I can add to my novel as necessary. The actual events serve as background to the main novel. Hope that helps.
  • Diego<3Amazing! (though that cat bureau bit was slightly random) Lol but rly gd would you mind checking out 'Lullaby' and 'proud to be a jew' thx
    XNiekoThanks and i would love to. Oh and yeah it was supposed to have that effect (the cat bureau bit).
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