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I love you

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Thowra
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  • Published:
    19 Mar 12
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Blurb De fleste kender sikkert dette digt fra min novelle/fanfiction 'Lucifer' Nu har jeg valgt at lægge resten af digtet herind (; Some of you properly know the poem from my danish fanfiction/novelle 'Lucifer' Now I have chosen to put the rest of the poem in here. ~Thowra
Plot keywords:
love
Category:
Poetry
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Approx 1 minutes to read


I love you

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The road you’re walking on and the sad ring you have on.

I said I would love only you my entire life.

I promised I would protect only you.

So why are you leaving?

 

I love you.

Even when I scream your name.

How come you can’t answer me?

I couldn’t even bid you farewell.

Don’t go. How can you just abandon me and leave?

What am I going to do by myself?

Please don’t leave me.

Please.. In this world.

 

Your smiling picture seems so sad today.

As I’m holding you in my arms.

Is the falling rain your tears as you walk down the road?

Is the blowing wind your lonely breaths?

I only have you.

Why did you abandon me and leave?

How come you can’t answer me?

I couldn’t even bid you farewell.

I’m sorry that I sent you by yourself.

Because only I’m left here.

I want to see you so much that I’m shaking.

Even in heaven, please be happy.

Just until I get there.

Farewell

 

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  • ProvinsenglenGodt skrevet. Det er ham Chokolademuffin fra hot :) Hvorfor kan man ikke skrive breve herinde?
    ThowraHey. Hm. Det ved jeg ikke, Det er bare ikke nødvendigt.
    Man lægger sine tekster ud, folk læser dem og kommentere.
    Det er det siden handler om ^^"
  • Surenderi am with you
  • Livvyi really like your style of writing and the way you execute the actions with simple words. enjoyed this a lot. i know it can get annoying, but would you mind checking out my piece, "Like Mother Like Daughter"?
    ThowraThanks for your feed back at my poem.
    Of course will I check out your piece :-)
  • Em :) Oh.. this was so sad! I love how you describe it well at the beginning, so it seems like they just broke up, and then you read the end, and he's dead, really good poem :) i would love to know what you think of my story perfection if you get the chance! :)
    ThowraThanks for your words. The poem means alot for me.
    I know you can't read danish, and my description is on Danish, so I'll translate it for you:
    "Some of you properly know this poem from my short story/fanfiction 'Lucifer' I have now chosen to put the rest of it on in here. I wrote the poem when I was 15 years, when my then-boyfriend died of leukemia, cancer. The poem is specially to him."
    ~ Thowra
    I thougth you should know the background for the poem, it makes it more sad, yes, but I thought you should know. :)
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