My Life My Death

by
jenn
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  • Published:
    13 Dec 11
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Blurb Talia is a 16 year old ghost. her ex-best friend killed her and her friends, but Jamie and Katie are not what they were. They were all murdered and the killer is never caught for the doing, but Talia, Jamie, Paul and Katie all want her dead. how will they do it and will they be able to???

Plot keywords:
love,  murder,  revenge,  loss,  death,  trust,  ghosts,  blood,  hatred
Category:
Mystery & Suspense
Approx 1 hours to read

My Life My Death

3. dead!!

The sun shines in through the window and onto my face. It’s warm and welcoming light wakes me. I open my eyes and sit up. “Good morning.”

I look at the silhouette and realize who it is. “Natalia” I whisper. The words barely able to be said any louder. “What are you doing here?” I say faintly louder.

“I came to do what Jason never did.”

“Which is?”

“Oh god, he didn’t tell you?” Natalia laughs under her breath at my stupidity. “I sent him here to kill you but he didn’t so he failed his task.” Her tone is more serious now and she’s starting to scare me. Like if you were in my position right now, you would be scared shit, no joke.

Natalia reaches into her coat’s pocket and removes a knife. She walks towards me and stops at the couch. She looks at the knife as kneels down onto the carpet. “Can you see any smudges or stains?” Natalia askes before I shake my head. “Ok.” She says simply.

She swings the knife around into my right arm. The speed and force of the knife causes it to go deep into my flesh. I scream in pain and agony. I fall to the ground holding the knife and surrounding flesh. Natalia stands and pulls a gun out of her back pocket. She points it at me but doesn’t pull the trigger. “You should be thankful that I’m going to put you out of your misery. Goodbye Talia Sanders.” She takes aim for my chest and pulls the trigger. The bullet flies into my chest, hitting me in the middle of my heart. Natalia pulls the bloody knife out of my arm and runs to the waiting car in my driveway. Drops of my blood, drop onto the floor and stain the carpet red, my body, on the carpet, waiting to be found. Later.

 

Comments (45)

  • AnaleighJamesNew chapter, that I've already read hahaha. But it's still just as freaking mind blowing as the first time. How far along are you in the book? Are the pages staying this time? Hahaha I can't wait to read more Jen; how have the rest of your holidays been?? Sporting club yesterday??
    Love Belle
    jennhahaha. thanks belle. and i'm up to chapter 4. and my holz have been boring boring and more boring except 4 seeing wrath of the titans with u. thats about all my holz excitment and sporting club was on sun and ally was amazing (but wen isn't she??)
    luv Jen xxx
    AnaleighJamesWoot chapter 4, slowly getting closer to finishing. Hope there's enough pages for you hahaha. Wraith of the titans was awesome wasn't it?? Though Sam Worthington's Australian accent was both beautiful and annoying, who knew Greeks spoke with an Aussie accent back then?? Haha. Did you get any more bags of feed?? First place ribbons?? Ugh school soon bahh :P
    Love Belle
    jennanother bag of feed 4th this month btw and ally got reserve champ
  • jennNew chapter, Betrayal. hope u like it
  • jennchapter 11- far across the beach- is new. i lost i then found it.
  • AnaleighJamesHeyy Jenny
    Jeez another chapter wow good on ya. Remember to keep writing in your book so I can borrow it soon. And remember white out is your friend not your enemy, haha. I love it thank you Jen :)
    Love Belle
    jenni'm in chapt 2 in book and whaite out is my enemy. love u 2 xoxo
    luv jen
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