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  • StarWish
    vor 4 JahrenAntworten
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    Really good start and written better than some. Please keep writing! <3
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    Harry Styles, the homeless guy who does everything for his sister Gemma's daughter Sam. Gemma died from cancer years ago, now, Sam and Harry lives in the streets, struggling to keep themselves alive. But...
  • StarWish
    vor 4 JahrenAntworten
    (BowTiesAreCool) Hi, I've looked at the covers you've made so-far and I think they're brilliant. Certainly way better than anything I could make. I'd love it to have a cover made by you for one of my movellas but could I email you about it because in order for the cover to be right I'd like to give away a detail that's meant to be a surprise to the reader? xx
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    This used to be my main cover store but I now have a newer version so feel free to go there for any covers.
    Lily Anna
    vor 4 Jahren
    I can make you one, but probably not tonight because I won't have enough time. Sure just email me whenever and i'll reply to it as soon as I can. :)
    StarWish
    vor 4 Jahren
    I wouldn't expect it tonight anyway, you can take as long as you need. Thank you :-D
    Lily Anna
    vor 4 Jahren
    Ok, thanks! :) Your welcome! :)
  • StarWish
    vor 4 JahrenAntworten
    One magical object from Harry Potter? A remembrall. That could really come in handy with a memory like mine.
    Everything Harry Potter
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    Are you a Harry Potter fan? If yes then this is the Movella for you. Whether you just love discussing Harry Potter, telling Harry Potter related humor or anything else that is in any way connected to Harry...
    Emma Bird
    vor 4 Jahren
    Hehe I know what you mean!! xx
  • StarWish
    vor 4 JahrenAntworten
    I like this. I think it's a good start. The characters well developed and realistic and you have made it your own story rather than overusing the same storyline as everone else seems to take. You do need to be careful with your tenses though. Are you writing in past or present? For example at the end of the second chapter you write 'My anger boiled up inside of me and I lunged at him. (then you switch to present tense) I laugh when I find I'm stronger' Besides from that and a quick check for typos it's pretty good. If you keep updating you'll probably get a lot more people noticing it.
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    I am finally awake ....after 100 years sleep I was finally woken up . But by who ? Who would be so foolish to wake up a vampire especially one as hungry , evil and heartless as me ? Surely not another...
    Missnothingpersonal
    thankyou for the positive feedback :) Im gonna fix the typos over the week and update again soon
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