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Hey everyone, welcome to my virtual home where I'll bring you all my entertaining stories, lore, and creative imagination. If anyone wants a cyber friend to chat with, I'd be more than glad to. If you want to chat with me, my email is: stevendwill16@gmail.com

  • Steven Will -Dream Walker

    mumbled "I'm So Busy... Ugh.. :("

    Hey everyone! I just wanted to let all of you know that I've been very busy lately and I still am at the moment, but eventually I'll get back to working on that story. Don't worry! We will all get to see more red soon(Ish)! :)
  • Steven Will -Dream Walker

    Looking For Readers!

    Hey everyone! Today is the day that we begin 'Seeing Red'. I have a sincere hope that one day this story will become a best seller! So, please give it a read and hopefully like, favorite and/or comment. It would make the author very happy! ... And he would very greatly appreciate it! :) XD So.. Here is the link down below:
    Seeing RedRachel, a beautiful woman diagnosed with sadism, narcissism and insanity at the age of six finds herself obsessed with the color red, this color means...
  • Steven Will -Dream Walker

    mumbled "New Story!"

    Hey everyone! Today is the day that we begin 'Seeing Red'. I have a sincere hope that one day this story will become a best seller! So, please give it a read and hopefully like, favorite and/or comment. It would make the author very happy! ... And he would very greatly appreciate it! :) XD So.. Here is the link down below:
    Seeing RedRachel, a beautiful woman diagnosed with sadism, narcissism and insanity at the age of six finds herself obsessed with the color red, this color means...
  • Steven Will -Dream Walker
    I like this song, it gives a good vibe and it makes me feel like I'm in a magical moment.. I don't really know how to describe the exact tone but it feels a bit nostalgic and a bit slow and relaxed.
    There is a grammatical error, it says:' Decades olds' It should be 'Decades old'. Other than that, great job! I'm still learning the ropes too, so I'm not a master at it yet but I'll get there one day. I hope that my CC was of value!
    Dancing (In the Firelight)
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    As with all great songs, this was written between 12:01 and 12:05 at night. Most of my proof-readers (a whole two, by the way) interpreted this as a country song. Don’t think country, please. I beg of...
    Midnight_Souls
    1 months ago
    Thank you for your feedback! It is most definitely valued.
    Steven Will -Dream Walker
    You're welcome and I'm glad to hear that!
  • Steven Will -Dream Walker
    Ch. 1 Review: I like this chapter, it is nicely written. I like the usage of onomatopoeia, it makes the action sound more lively and it helps spark the imagination. The main character is Terrence ( Terror) and he seems to be likable although he is kind of a liar. I'm worried about what is going to happen with him and that guy.. There's only one thing for me to give you advice on so far and that is your summary doesn't explain anything really though. It is important to have at least a few plot pointers in your summary because even if you have a nice cover (Which you do by the way), if there isn't much of a summary the potential reader is going to be like " So what? What is this even about?" That's not a good thing especially if you have a goal in mind to eventually have this book in bookstores for people to buy and read. Other than that, I'm liking your story!
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    Terrence "Terror" Averston was a great liar. He lied on a whim, and it always resulted in the best possible way. In a way, lying built who he was. It got him to the top. But one day, his lies caught up...
    The Yeti
    1 months ago
    Thanks! I'll be sure to write a better description!
    Steven Will -Dream Walker
    You're welcome!
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