KvindeUnited StatesMedlem siden 1 feb. 18Last online 12 hours ago

Hello reader! It’s so nice to meet you! Thank you so much for coming to take a look at my profile, and below you’ll find out some important information regarding my writing. One: if you don’t know already, I’m a flash fiction writer (meaning my stories are written between 300-1,000 words); so they move pretty fast. Currently, I’m working on my collection “Once Upon A Time”, which features a twisted theme correlating to fairytales and other ideas. Two: my writing is meant to hold a deeper meaning than what’s taken in on the first read, you’ll find there are many explanations and details that are hidden throughout the story. Anyway, I hope you’d like to check it out, and thanks again so much for taking a look! I look forward to writing and sharing with all of you!

  • RockMusic18

    mumbled "I'd love if you could do this!"

    1 weeks agoSvar
    Hello, so I recently posted my newest short story "In Small Doses of Bliss". I'm very grateful for the amount of reads that I've received, though I always want to know how I can improve my writing. If you could give me any constructive criticism, story ideas, or just a thought, I'd love to hear it!
    Once Upon A TimeOnce upon a time... "Bailey poses exquisitely, a single damp tear trailing down her porcelain face, yet an elegant smile painted upon thin rosy lips." ...
  • RockMusic18
    1 weeks agoSvar
    I love the first chapter! I like how it's going at a steady pace and brings a great introduction to the rest of the plot. If you wouldn't mind, I'd like to recommend something. When describing the appearance in the beginning "With her ruddy brown hair, caramel skin and wide, innocent eyes..." I would give the reader one of those descriptions instead of all at once. I especially liked the "with her ruddy brown hair", I really enjoyed the words used. But this would give the reader time to come up with their own appearance for the character, and then later on in the story, you could give more details. Appearance gives away a lot of the personality. Nonetheless, this chapter was beautifully written and I look forward to reading more of it. You're an incredible writer and the description alone had me hooked!
    Our Dark Lies
    Our Dark Lies
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    Olyxe “Ash” Heregale is not to be messed with. She lives for violence, laughs in the face of danger. She’s driven by a rage so bright and fierce, it’s not wonder she does so many stupid things. Freeing...
    Midnight_Souls
    1 weeks ago
    Aww thank you! I always tend just to slap down all my descriptions at once and I’m definitely working on doling it out more gradually to better integrate it with the story!
  • RockMusic18

    mumbled "Thank goodness! Here's another short story!"

    1 weeks agoSvar
    Since school is almost here (sadly)... I decided that I'd try to finish my next story "In Small Doses of Bliss". I hope you guys like it, but this will probably be the last time I update for a while due to school. Thanks!
    Once Upon A TimeOnce upon a time... "Bailey poses exquisitely, a single damp tear trailing down her porcelain face, yet an elegant smile painted upon thin rosy lips." ...
  • RockMusic18

    mumbled "So... it's been a month"

    2 weeks agoSvar

    Hey guys, it's been a while. Between summer outings and getting ready for back to school, I've been pretty busy. I'm sad to say it might be like this for a while longer, but here's a teaser for another story I've been working on. I hope to finish it soon.
    Midnight_Souls
    2 weeks ago
    Very intriguing teaser, I look forward to reading it because of the quality of the description alone! :)
    RockMusic18
    1 weeks ago
    Thank you so much!
  • RockMusic18

    mumbled "To my brother"

    1 months agoSvar
    This is for my brother. Please read, thanks.
    "It Doesn't Define You"
    Once Upon A TimeOnce upon a time... "Bailey poses exquisitely, a single damp tear trailing down her porcelain face, yet an elegant smile painted upon thin rosy lips." ...
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