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  • MeMyself&I
    5 years agoSvar
    En anden verden.Har du nogensinde været opslugt af en anden verden? En verden i en bog? Forskellen her er at du kan rive dig løs af den. Det er ikke alle der kan.
    Læs og læg en kommentar med jeres mening, og jeg gengælder gerne tjenesten :)
  • MeMyself&I
    5 years agoSvar
    Decent plot and you're a decent writer as well :) As Tazz said, some grammar mistakes - Maybe you should do what I do? English isn't my first language either, so I have friends who reads it through for me to make sure it has as few mistakes as possible :) Some of the mistakes makes it a bit hard to read sometimes, to get the full meaning.

    But overall, a good story, nice plot, nice characters, practice makes perfect :) I enjoyed it. :)
    Keep writing :)
    Bieber's girlfriend
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    Have you ever wondered? What if.. What if i was the girl? Well let me help you, and take you away from Earth for a lil bit.
  • MeMyself&I
    5 years agoSvar
    Yo! :)
    I like the way you write, you're good at alternating your words so it all doesn't sound too alike.

    My personal preference is a bit longer chapters, but the overall experience was good.

    Might give the other one a try as well.

    I'll stay tuned for more :)
    Secrets, Lies and a Love in Disguise
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    Persephone has a normal, quite boring life. She goes to a good school, has some great friends and all the usual problems. But when she ends up in a hotel in a foreign country with One Direction, who she...
    Anon^.^
    5 years ago
    Thank you very much!! :-)
  • MeMyself&I
    5 years agoSvar
    Well written, although I would've liked longer chapters :)
    Haven't read The Hunger Games, or seen the movie, but this actually peaked my interest in it!

    Good job mate :) A like from me (:
    My Blood
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    A Hunger Games fan fiction. Please support me in the contest! :D The video to the right does not seem to be working so here is a link to the original trailer for The Hunger Games: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RNxb28j...
    MeMyself&I
    5 years ago
    No problem :)
    Keep up the good work. I like your writing style :)
    MeMyself&I
    5 years ago
    No problem :)
    Keep up the good work. I like your writing style :)
    BlueBooks
    5 years ago
    :D That means a lot! Thanks :)
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