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This is where I sometimes pretend to be deep.

Share your thoughts. <3

  • LaerkeB
    5 years agoSvar
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    This is extremely good. It flows perfectly. One of the most amazing poems I've ever read. :)
    The Writer
    The Writer
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    WriterMan
    5 years ago
    Thank you. You're so kind.
  • LaerkeB
    5 years agoSvar
    It's good, it have a great flow. I especially like the first verse :)
    RUN!
    RUN!
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    This is a poem about a girl who is running away from herself
  • LaerkeB
    5 years agoSvar
    This gotta be my favorite poem made by you! I like how you set it up, so ones who reads it, can feel the power of your words :-)
    So I Did
    So I Did
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    A short poem explaining how one disastrous act, caused by something seemingly harmless, can turn out the worst for everybody... (My second entry for the poetry competition. My first entry, and the positive...
    Genny Lawrence
    5 years ago
    Thank you! I thought this one was my weakest poem, but now I think I'm changing my mind!
  • LaerkeB
    5 years agoSvar
    You are very talented! I like how everything is so perfectly described :-)
    Fault and Blame
    Fault and Blame
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    Who's fault is it really, when a relationship doesn't work out? Who does the blame fall on? This is a short poem telling the sad tale of a poor girl trying to figure it out... (My third entry to the poetry...
  • LaerkeB
    5 years agoSvar
    Amazing poem, I really like your choice of words. :-)
    Fixed to be Broken
    Fixed to be Broken
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    A simple poem telling the tragic tale of a girl, whose heart has been broken one too many times... (My entry for that poetry contest. Poetry isn't my strong point so I am open to all advise and constrictive...
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