Girls

by
♥Lulu♥
  • Published:
    14 Oct 12
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Blurb Katie,Bella and Amy have been best friends since forever and they want to keep it that way but Katie gets invited to a 1D concert things get tricky as she can only bring one friend...

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Diary
Approx 2 minutes to read

Girls

1. Bella

Hi.I am Bella and I am 17.I have two best friends called Katie and Amy.They are the kind of girls who love gossip but would never tell anyone your secrets.We all have an obsession with One Direction.That is what brought us together.We were at a concert and I stamped on Katie's toe and I broke it.Then Katie collapsed onto Amy while I was repeating "I am so sorry,I am so sorry"some way to meet your best friends.We discovered that we lived in the same area and from then on we just became more and more tight.It is the kind of friendship that many girls would kill for.We are 3 lucky girls really as all of our family's are rich and we live in huge,stately homes and we are all happy,with perfect boyfriends who are also best friends.It works out pretty well for us and nothing will ever tear us apart...

 

Comments (1)

  • Novalee ZaidenI've noticed this in almost every story.

    the first chapter is always the introduction and it sounds like a penpal message. Try not to DUMP the entire character profile on the reader. It makes it annoying and I can't remember everything. Add it gradually in the story and it would be much better.

    I know you’ve probably heard advertising messages from me, but my BFF (Aimee) is entering another contest and it would mean a lot if you checked it out and gave your opinion. I think she’s quite serious about this competition because it’s such a sensitive subject. Thanks for reading, we both say thanks! (I’m her publicist :P)
    movellas.com/en/book/read/20121014124006..
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