love forever

by
Vedika
  • Published:
    10 Aug 12
  • On 3 favourite lists
  • 504 views
Blurb love stories, of different loves.Narrated through poems. all are different.all are unique. you may like them
Plot keywords:
lovestories
Category:
Romance
Rating:
Approx 1 minutes to read


love forever

1. dream guy

here,in my dreams,

do i meet you

you,with your gorgeous smile,

and warm embrace

 

i come to you

slowly taking my step

where you hug me tight,

as always,i feel warm and protected

 

on the beach,

we go hand in hand

taking in the beautiful sunset;

i never want it to end

 

now does the cover of the night

befall on us

as the full moon rises

and the stars smile.

 

you make me laugh,

you make me cry,

you make me do that,

never wanting to say goodbye

 

and as the unwanted sun approaches,

bathing in sunlight,

I don't want to do it,

but i kiss you goodbye

 

slowly my eyes open

trying to shed off the light

here i am,back in reality,

dedicating my first smile of the day for you,

 

lying in bed, i think about you

missing you a lot

bot somewhere in my heart i knew,

we are never apart

 

 

 

Comments (7)

  • xxJenJenxxBeautiful! Favourited/Liked. The only thing I would say is i should be I and you put bot somebody, simple to change though=) please could you read some if my poems, thanks x
  • Jas247Lovely xx really sweet and touching, I hope you place!
  • ToryBDo you know about the big poetry competition? Because you should totally enter it with this poem or a different one. This poem is beautiful and I really think you have a chance of winning! The only criticism I could give it is that some of your i's aren't capital letters, unless of course you're purposely keeping them like that for effect. Keep up the great work!!!!
    ToryBIf you have time could you please comment on my story 'Two decaf coffees and two extra-large chocolate doughnuts' I'd really appriaciate it thanks!!!
    Vedikathnx dude n yea i hav entered the compition aldready,
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