Awake Yet Asleep
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LyrisisThank u all- 10 months ago
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- Andrew FraneyIt's strange but I think we have similar writing styles. I feel like I could be reading something I wrote, but forgot about it. I think I like my poetry. So I guess I like yours too. :).. I'm going to read more now.
- 10 months ago
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- Fallen One In the eight line, I think it would be better to write "and" instead of using the symbol "&".
Otherwise, I think the poem is quite good, reflecting the anxiety that all of us get from time to time, no matter how sure we are about ourselves.
If you could please take a look at my work "Return of the Reaper" I would be very grateful, thank you :D- 11 months ago
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- wagonwheels12I love this, you can almost get lost in it. It flows perfectly :D
- 11 months ago
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- Dinakarcool ,nicely expressed.In the 8th line the spelling of "trapt "should be "trapped"
- 11 months ago
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