Hopes last breath

by
Little miss punk
  • Published:
    12 Jul 12
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Blurb Rhona was murdered in her own home so now she is trapped there trying to find away to be free. She finds away to comminicate with the people that have moved into her house but they have to find away to save her because she is slowly fading like a memory. What will happen to her if they can't save her in time?

Plot keywords:
trapped,  help,  vampire,  freedom,  save,  murdered,  gone,  ghost,  fading,  dead
Category:
Fantasy
Approx 13 minutes to read

Hopes last breath

5. Early

 

We have the house to our selves; Cara left a few hours ago and Adam, is thats his name well he left early in the mourning before any one else was up. We are borred; about an hour ago I told him he could go out if he wanted but he said he would feel guilty leaving me alone. I know, I think well it could be interesting but I'm gonna supervise so it can't go that bad.

 

He is just a guy after all not a wild animal but they have been here for awhile and I haven't seen the guy cook any thing beyond toast. Then again my brother Conner had us all convinced he couldn't cook until he cooked for his girl friend. I'm still not sure because a few nights ago Cara was making dinner and he came in asking if he needed help but she said not from him so he might be a kitchen disaster but if he is then it will be fun to watch and I don't have to clean up.

 

"Do you have the ingredent to make cupcakes"

"Yes"

"Can you make cupcakes"

"Absultlely no way"

 

"Because your going to make them"

"Fine but I'm going to experment"

"You will stick to the recipe and I will supevise"

"Isn't it the womans job to cook"

 

"Don't be so sexist"

"Well in my house they do"

"Why?"

"Because things can get dangerous if I get near a cooker"

 

He proved me right because when he put them in he nearly burnt the house down and then he got him self covered in frosting. Oh and he also broke the mixer because he put to mutch in but it was funny to watch and I'm glad I didn't have to clean up, so ha ha ha ha. We are sitting in the attic now and we are trying to figure out what we should do next.

 

"Hey Jack are you there" Cara calls from down stairs

"Oh crap keep quiet"

"Should stay you know visible"

"Yeah I guess"

 

the house is silent so I can here her in the kitchen doing something but I can't here what, I can here them coming up the stairs. I think she is looking for Jack, she comes up to the attic and we are panicing like crazy but she just raises her eyes brows.

 

"Who's your friend?" "Long story"

"Really?"

"Yup"

 

"Why does she looks so familur?"

"It her"

"From the picture?"

"Yup"

 

"Isn't she you know dead"

"Told you it was a long story"

"Start talking then"

 

It takes a half an hour to tell her but it takes less than a miunte to prove it to her; she tell me she thinks my are a pretty to but I can tell she feels akward. Any akwardness is over when he asks how they're gonna tell Adam, they say they don't want to stress him out. It gets Akward again when jack tell her about yesterday and she says along the same lines as he did. Then of course she asks about the horrible smell so I tell her all about jacks cupcakes and how he enarly set the house on fire, so I think we might be friends after all.

 

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