Make a Wish

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SlenderMan_
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    21 Jul 12
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Blurb Amy and Steve have been inseparable since college, and are desperate to open up their own designer studio. However, they face problems that make their dream seem so far away and out of reach. Will they overcome these obstacles and fulfil their dream? Instead of showing the problems they might face during business, I have decided to write a series of short chapters based on how they got there and what they went through to reach their dream. -My entry into the Beat Girl: Fan Fiction competition :)

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Approx 16 minutes to read

Make a Wish

1. Evil in Black with a Suitcase

It's all well and good having a dream, but you can’t rely on a star to make them come true, you have to do some of the work, otherwise you’ll never get where you want to be. I learnt that from an early age, my mother said that it’s healthy to dream but the stars won’t do all the work themselves. I guess that kinda makes sense. Stars are just balls of fire, but if you didn't believe that they could make your wishes come true, then you would lead a very boring life. One needs magic to keep them from going insane. If you took out all the magic from the Harry Potter books, there’d be nothing left, all the imagination would be stripped out of it.  

I’ve worked hard to get where I am today. During college, Steve and I saved up enough money to open up our own studio. College got me the training I need to run my own business, and with the help of Steve, I’d have the fashion studio I’d always dreamed of. I haven’t spoken to Heather in a while; she has been so focused on her music that we’ve kinda drifted apart.  We are very similar, you know, she was determined to get into Julliard, whereas I was determined to survive college without any problems, and open up my own studio.   

Steve had begun to fill the position of being my best friend, since Heather had other priorities. I don’t blame her, I just wish I had the same interests as her, music isn’t my thing, and it never has been. Fashion is what drives me; it’s what keeps me sane. It’s my sanctuary, it’s just a shame I can’t share it with both of my friends.

Steve and I bonded quickly; it did not take long for us to become friends. I met him during the first week of being in London’s Design College, and he made me feel incredibly welcome, we both joined a college with none of our friends from our previous schools. We were in it alone. It was lucky I found a friend in him so soon; otherwise I would have been completely isolated, not having a clue how to fit in.

I began to feel comfortable in my own skin, I guess Steve brought that out in me, his presence allowed me to relax and not care about the other students.   

“This isn’t high school, Amy,” he had said during the first week. He was right, of course. I didn’t have to worry so much about being in a clique, or being popular, in college, I could be myself and not have to worry.

His constant presence was what made my college life fairly easy. And look where it had gotten us? Our dreams were coming true! I couldn’t currently be any happier. Except there was a small problem...  

A debt collector was banging on my door.  

 

Comments (33)

  • BeatGirlThank you so much for entering the competition! you're really talented :)
    SlenderMan_No problem! Glad you liked it!
  • EvangilinaHey you know i love most of your work!!<3 This is no exception..if you can would you mind spending some time (on chat) with me? I got half hit by a car and i'm not allowed to move for 2 days, really boring and miss talking to you<3<3<3
    SlenderMan_Thank you! I hope you're better <33
  • ToryBI love the title of your first chapter 'Evil in black with a suitcase', and infact I love all the titles of your chapters! The ending of your first chapter is dramatic and this debt collector storyline is really good.
    ToryBIf you could please read my story 'Two decaf coffees and two extra large chocolate doughnuts' I'd really appricate it. It would be really good to get some comments and criticism on it. Thanks!!!
    SlenderMan_Thank you! I'm glad you like it, it was fun to write! And sure! :D
  • Erica Zebra BluewaterThis is really good :) I'll be routing for you in the competition :)
    SlenderMan_Thank you! Would you mind telling me what you liked/ what could be improved? :D
  • BlueBooksAmazingly brilliant! They might as well just place you now! :P
    I love this! You really went into the story and I felt like I was watching it on a screen. It was all so well played out. Great idea and not a single fault. The Red Bull thing was espcially brilliant and I loved the last chapter! Awh! :)
    SlenderMan_Awh thank you very much! Your comment made me smile like an idiot! Hah, yeah, the Red Bull thing was a joke when I wrote it, but when I finished the chapter, I actually liked it so I decided to keep it, and it looks like it worked! And yeah, the last chapter was tricky, I had to think of a way to end it well without it seeming cliché or stupid, so I'm glad you liked it!
    Thank you, I hope I place too! :D xox
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