Anywhere But Home

by
Tylar Jayde
  • Published:
    6 Jul 12
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Blurb 2 teenagers get stuck on an island after a party. They don't have phones, food, or other clothes. Now how will they get off the island?
Approx 5 minutes to read


Anywhere But Home

1. Chapter 1: Now What?

I wake up in an uncomfortable position. My neck is sore. I sit up, and realize I'm sitting in a boat. It's a lifeboat. What happened? I look to my right, and there's a boy next to me. He's sleeping. I immediately recognize him from Drama class. I look ahead, bringing my right hand up to shade my eyes. There's a huge island towering above us. I gasp. Where are we? Why are we in a boat? The boy from school, Eli, wakes up. He sees me and his eyes get huge. 

"What are you doing here, Alyssa?" he asks. He looks at me like he's never seen me before.

"I honestly don't know. What are you doing here?" I retort. He shrugs, his flippy brown hair falling down onto one of his big hazel eyes. He pushes it away, but it doesn't stay, so he dunks his hand in the water. He slicks his hair back with it. 

"What?" he questions. I shake my head, causing my blonde hair to flop around with the help of the wind. I stand up, causing the boat to rock a little. Eli grabs hold of the edges, trying to hold himself up.

"Sorry," I whimper. He shrugs, as if saying 'no big deal.' I smile. "We should probably call someone, how the hell did we even get out here?"

"Good idea, Captain Obvious," he says rolling his eyes. I scoff at him. "As for the last part, I really don't know. I kind of remember a party last night, do you? Maybe we were drunk and jumped in the boat to.." his voice trails off.

"NO!" I screech. He backs up a little, which was hard in the little boat. I regain composure and calmly say, "I would never do that. I don't even drink."

"Buzz Killington," he mutters.

"What was that?" I ask, pretending I didn't hear what he said. He acts like he didn't speak, and I nod approvingly with a smirk. I reach into my pocket for my phone, but it's nowhere to be found. Great. Eli can't find his either.

"Now what?"

 

Comments (9)

  • EmmyC(: This is really good!! :)
  • sophiebear123This is good, write more chapters x
    Tylar Jaydejust did, thank you(:
  • sophie1999this is great please write more and check out my movella another side to me thanks xx
  • bethan.cockram That is really good!! Maybe you should check out some of my Movellas? xxx
    Thanks, I was really impressed.

    The one I suggest you read is Secrets!!! Thanks, its really good your should honestly think of being an author!
    Tylar Jaydeaww thank you so much(:
  • Fallen One"I just want to be remembered, not forgotten. Not just another person who dies & rots in the ground & nobody remembers my name." --> No one dies that isn't remembered at least by a few people. I believe it's the quality of the memories you leave behind that's important, rather than how many people remember you.

    As for your writing, I apologize if it sounds a bit harsh.

    In the first paragraph, you mention a boy the narrator doesn't recognize, but immediately mentions him as "eli". How did she recognize him? Does he have a characteristic that makes him stand out? It sounds a bit strange that a girl would not recognize someone (not even be sure if he went to her school) and the next know him by name.

    Otherwise, a bit short, but certainly intriguing. Perhaps you could give a hint about how old are the two people in the boat? If the girl isn't acquainted with the guy (otherwise she would have probably recognized him immediately), why does he know her name? Looking forward for more of this :D

    If you could please read my work "Return of the Reaper" and give me your opinion on it, I would be most grateful :D
    Tylar JaydeThank you for catching my errors! I will fix them. I was sort of in a rush when writing so I wouldn't forget the idea. I will definitely check yours out.(: thanks again!
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