The Transfer

by
Liv liv <3
  • Published:
    4 Jul 12
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Blurb Fourteen year old, Kathleen Roberts, finds herself forced to move away from her friends and most importantly her boyfriend, Aaron. Kat experiences quite a culture shock when she moves from sunny San Francisco to Hackney, London. Gareth, Kats' father, is delighted when his boss offers him a promotion, to a branch of the company, in London. But, in telling Kat the news, he finds out that she is not as impressed.
Plot keywords:
teenage romance, gang culture, drama
Category:
Romance
Rating:
Approx 5 minutes to read


The Transfer

3. The News

I thought that the day couldn't get any worse- my best friend was dating my crush and now I'd lost my best friend altogether- but I found out that it could get worse, much worse.

 

I walked the rest of the way alone and I couldn’t wait to get home. I pushed the key into the keyhole and tactically twisted it from side to side.

“Hello, I’m home!” I yelled.

“Hello darling!” My dad, Gareth, yelled back from upstairs. He jumped up and galloped down the stairs, “I’ve got some great news, Kat”!”

 

His face, lit up, looked like a kid in a sweet shop.

“Okay, brace yourself…” He paused for dramatic effect, “I’ve got a promotion!”

“Well done dad!”

“There’s some good news and bad news though. What do you want first?”

“Good news, I could do with some cheering up.”

“I get a pay rise!” He said.

“So now you could get me the really nice jeans that I wanted…”

“Don’t push it, Kat. Okay, now for the bad news, the job’s in London.”

I couldn’t speak from shock. It felt like the room was spinning around me. I couldn’t take it anymore so I jumped up, flew out of the door and ran up the stairs to my room.

 

I lay on my bed, hugging a photo of me and my mum tightly to my chest. Tears rolled down my cheeks and dripped onto my pillow. I heard a knock on my door and then,

“Can I come in?”

“Kat’s not here right now, please leave a message after the tone, beep!” I said sarcastically.

“Okay, I understand that you’re upset about leaving San Francisco,” Gareth said from outside my room, “but you’ll make new friends in London and…”

“Mum wouldn’t have made me go…” I cried out.

“Well, mum’s not here, I am, and I am making you go,” he yelled.

 

 

I burst into uncontrollable tears of hatred then and they wouldn’t stop. I did love my dad and I wanted him to have the job but the price to pay was too big. I would have to leave San Francisco, all my friends and most importantly, Aaron. If I was to move to London now then I would have to do GCSE’s later than everyone else there because they will be prepared and I won’t. I don’t feel like I’d fit in in London, I’m scared that I will be bullied for my accent.

 

All these thoughts whizzed around in my head making it hard to think straight. I felt so conflicted- I wanted my dad to have the job but I didn’t want to leave San Francisco and that made me feel really selfish. What was I going to do?

 

 

Comments (5)

  • Liv liv <3Yeah I am still writing it, I'll be able to start writing quicker soon because it will be the holidays and i won't have school. And yeah I'll check out both of your books. :)
    Diego<3great new ch but I would leave out the 'To be continued' xD
    Liv liv <3Yeah I will- :( so annoyed, I just wrote the rest of that chapter and a bit of the next one and I've lost it all!!!!
  • Jas247wow,loved the main character, shes really easy to relate to but you need to right more... is she still with aaron? Who is the other person??????????? WRITE MORE! could you check out my book "the ghost" hx a lot, and seriously... WRITE MORE!
  • Diego<3oohh who will she choose I WANNA KNOW. MORE :D really great tension.
    If you have time can you check out 'Isle of bird' thanks :)
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