Please don't die on me

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Kieva Rising
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    28 Jun 12
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Blurb "My Dad has cancer. I don't know what to do." Angelica's Dad has cancer. When her Mum and Dad got divorce, she chose to live with her fun-loving Dad over her drugged up Mum. Angelica's Dad was re-married, and had two more kids, Morgan and Cerys. Twelve years later, Marvin got lung cancer. He has a fifty-fifty chance of survival. Angelica, has to learn that her Dad might not survive. What's a girl to do. Pray and say... #Please don't die on me!#
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Please don't die on me

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1. Me and Dad

He lay in a hospital bed. I gripped his hand at the side.  He smiled at me.

 

'It'll be okay, Angelica. It'll be okay'

 

Yeah, It will I thought as I blinked. He smiled then closed his eyes.

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  • lecynekieva, very brave attempt. it's encouraging to know more young people expressing their feelings and thoughts on this rather difficult subject. keep going!
    Kieva RisingThank you :)
    Kieva RisingMy mum's friend's stepdaughter had cancer so I asked her the week before I wrote this what it was like. She explained the asked what I was going to do with the info I had wrote down:
    Me: I'm on a writing website called Movellas and I was wanting to write a story about coping with cancer/ someone you love having cancer.
    Mum's friend: Ok, It was horrible until she died. She started to tell the twins that it would be okay. I miss her so much.
    So I decided to make a story on it.
  • Hairy Pits in Ya faceSorry to be a little persnickety, but if the test results came back negative, that would mean he didn't have cancer. They would be positive if he did. And have another look over at the grammar of the teacher, "never done it" should be changed to "didn't do it", and "but if you never done you're homework" should be changed to "but if you never did your homework" (you're= you are so then the sentence would be "but if you never did you are homework")
    Other than that, it was a really good story, I would like to see a bit more description of the characters though. thanks
    Kieva RisingThx for this. I meant to write "didn't do it", as that's what some people say in Scotland. I, also, didn't know about positive (having cancer) and negitive (not having cancer), as I get confused with them both. My grammar is bad, because my laptop keeps missing some of the words that I type. (My writings better on my home computer, which I am using the now). Thanks anyway :) P.S. the discription will come later.
  • the dark angel wrtite more !!!!!!!!!
    Kieva RisingI am the now. I'm writing their history!
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