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The island

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Redonherskates
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    26 Jun 12
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Blurb When Rhia is the only survivour on a island after a terrible tsunami, she finds outs theirs someone else their too, a guy, but will he help her or kill her?
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Fantasy
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Approx 1 minutes to read


The island

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1. 24th may, i think

Someones here. A guy, i dont know if it is a guy it might be a girl or a boy. But i imagine it as a he. But this is weird, i though i was the only one left on the island, i tried to swim away, but it was no use. Everytime i tried, the waves were too big, and the next island is too far away, whic is also deserted, so it would be no use. By my calculations i would get to the next island whith people in it, in like 3 years. I tried but it was no use, i just learnt to adapt to my enviroment and work here. At first the silent was horrible noone to talk to, but now, now its peaceful.

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  • Kieva RisingI really don't care about you're grammer, but it could be adapted. But who am I to talk XD
    Diego<3Lol look at my comment. I'm so harsh ;o
  • Diego<3Sorry to be picky but this has alot of issues that I think will help you if I writ it out to show you;)
    24th May (left out capital), I(capital again) think
    Someone's here; a guy, I don't know if it a guy, it might be a girl or a boy. But I imagine it is a he. *as dsnt make sense* But this is weird, I thought I was the only one left on the island; I tried to swim away, it was no use. Every time I tried the waves were too big; and the next island is too fat away which is also deserted and would be no use. By my calculations I would get to the next island with people it in about three years; I tried but it was no use. I had to learn to adapt to my environment and work on this island. At the first the silence was horrible; I had nobody to talk to. But now, now it is peaceful.
    Ch 2:
    It's a he and he saw me today; I was walking down the shore and he gazed upon me. Now he knows that I am here.

    You rushed a bit and ch 2 was very short xD and the description could have been better. I CNT WAIT TO SEE WHERE YOU GO WITH THIS! Sorry for being picky :(
    Diego<3oh and here is ch 2 title: Still May 24th; just in the night.
    Please don't hate me, just trying to help :D
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