moving to high school

by
the dark angel
  • Published:
    25 Jun 12
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Blurb moving to high school is hard but it supposed to be fun or is it
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Realism
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Approx 1 minutes to read


moving to high school

1. moving

When you have been in high school for so long you get attached and know lots of people and have best friends but at the end of P7 all of that changes.Some of your friends go of to different schools and you will maybe not be in touch with them any more, but when you move to high school everything changes. I feel scared and excited at the same time I have seen my school and made friends already so really anywhere you go you will always make friends, bulling is very unlikely to happen but if it does just go straight to the teacher or your mum.If someone calls you a name but then are friends with you later that means there only messing about but just have fun yeah, you will get more homework but still do your hardest and also have so much fun go out to places with friends go party.There will be some ups and downs and maybe teachers you don't like but that's only tiny wee things,like missing the bus or getting on the wrong one but trust yourself be ready in time set an alarm but still do your hardest I am going to secondary school in September yeah im pretty scared but know I will have the best of time there so you should too.

 

Comments (5)

  • Krystal LydiaWhere am I meant to breathe? :P
  • Kieva RisingThe grammer is a bit off and it is a bit rushed, but who am I to talk =^-^= It's still good tho!!!!!

    Hope you see this and reply to me and Lia. Thanks :)
    the dark angel im really sorry i just want to try to make my stuff good so people will read them and like them but thanks for things its good
  • Diego<3First question: where are the full stops and commas? It is extremely hard to read this without them. Capitalise i's and there are a few spelling errors. The plot seems ok but try not to rush it, I know sometimes we rly wanna get the idea onto the paper so do that but then adjust it so there is more description and less rushing. This has potential though and I can see it turning into a fine story when you proof read it and sort out grammar :)
    the dark angel im really sorry i really should be more careful but will make my next one less rushed and more full stops and everything im really sorry
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