Run for your life....

by
laughoutloud
  • Published:
    24 Jun 12
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Blurb Run, run....I keep running. Away...away..from.what? I don't know? All I remember is a man saying Run child, be free. I need to find out who he is and what does this message mean?
Plot keywords:
mystery
Category:
Mystery & Suspense
Rating:
Approx 1 minutes to read


Run for your life....

1. Run..my child...

Prologue

A old man bent over his daughters crate, he kissed her head lightly.

"I'm waiting." A icy voice called from behind him. 

"Can I have 1 minute, please." He asked, once the lady left the room, he grabbed the small baby and hugged her tight.

"Run, my child, and never return." He kissed her again and placed her onto the floor. The baby started to cry, 

"Goodbye my child." And then he was gone.....

 

Comments (1)

  • Bells HunterYou may want to elaborate the setting, what woman, and where they are (Maybe this does not fit your story, then maybe not) But I really like the concept, and I look forward to hearing more. Liked!
    The idea is really unique, and you could do many things with this story :)
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