I am Phoebe

by
Aijah
  • Published:
    23 Jun 12
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Blurb I wish you no harm. But if you threaten me I will hurt you. I live in a world beyond your mind. I have powers you cant even imagine. I am Phoebe.
Approx 5 minutes to read


I am Phoebe

1. My time

This is my time. It's my time to revenge and to hunt the hunters. It's my time to make my enemies surrender and to make them cry out loud for mercy. Like my parents did when they killed them cold bloody. They will scream and regreat all the evil things they did to my family. But i can't do this on my own. I need power. I need backup. I need someone to trust. But how can i do that when everyone i look in the eye see my anger. They gett scared. They run away shouting for god. As if their god can save them. I wish no harm to anyone, but if anyone stands in my way... May their gods be with them. Maybe you will understand my anger better if you learn my history. Be warned! It's dark and there are things i did that i should be ashamed of. But I am not. Because my mind is controlled by pure rage. Rage to the hunters...

 

Comments (2)

  • Brighthey. i like your story line. you might want to think more about your word choices. i am sure you can make a great story. and oh yeah check your spelling there is some typos here and there nothing major but it still break the readers focus :)
    AijahThanks, will sure do! Thanks for reading! :)
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