The Best Moment Of My Life
Blurb Winnie thinks she has a normal life, but when her Mum dies and her Dad goes off to war she thinks differently...
Approx 7 minutes to read
Comments (19)
VioletRoseOkay I loved this story it was really sweet and Sad but chapter 2 The big news was a bit like: and then, and then and then because it went a bit quick but I still like this story. it is very emotional and a good read. I loved the ending xxxx :')) I hope Winnie had a happy life after that :')) XD- 11 months ago
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VioletRoseLol. I really like this story though xx
:'))- 11 months ago
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♥lovin the hearts♥thanks- 11 months ago
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Tiger3001george you have got to read stole my heart it is amazing- 10 months ago
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- 10 months ago
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- Tiger3001moreeeeeee lıke how you read ıt out ı love the endıng dont tell me youve forgeotten ıt ps emaıl me
- 11 months ago
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- Tiger3001loves it george amazıng even better than that tıme u read ıt out though wont say where!
- 11 months ago
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- Y. Nirvana I really like the plot and the sixth chapter is emotional - I like how you show that your character is in shock. What I would like to see, though, is more description because I want to imagine what the characters look like and what Winnie's life was like prior her mother's death. I'm intrigued by how the events will unfold from here. Would you mind checking out one of my movellas? I would really appreciate some feedback :)
- 1 years ago
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♥lovin the hearts♥sure! If you'd like to read the next chapter, then sign up for this movella to be on your favourites!- 1 years ago
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- IcewolfI really like it, the story flows well and the ending......aww so sad, would really like to read another chapter :) if you could check it my diary story- Top Spot and my romance story- lives frosty bite. Would really appreciate it and if you like it leave me some feedback please :D also if you really like it , please favourite it and tell a friend or another author on here if you thin they'd like it, thanks :)
- 1 years ago
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♥lovin the hearts♥sure course i will!- 11 months ago
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