An Apology

by
Amy-Jay
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  • Published:
    17 Jun 12
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Blurb writing is a form of expression and communication, this wasn't written for entertainment this was just how I felt...
Plot keywords:
love, regret, cheating, past
Category:
Poetry
Rating:
Approx 1 minutes to read


An Apology

1. -

I know it was my fault, my love,

My fault, and mine only.

Alas it's been too long, my dear;

to ever mend that which I broke

but under the cover of the night

I'll hold you in my mind so tight,

to whisper unspoken apologies,

in hope they'll one day reach you.

And in that moment you'll think of me;

That Liar, That cheat, That whore,

but, my love, please hear me out,

for that is me no more.

 

Time  heals all, my mother says,

as my father tells me;

never look back, but

I'll sneak a glance over my shoulder,

looking to the clock for when it strikes healed.

 

Comments (22)

  • BlueBooksBrilliantly written and much enjoyed. You are a very good poet and I instantly felt the emotion. :D Well done :)
    Amy-JayThankyou, glad you liked it!! :)
  • deltabravoI just loved the expression of it. A very honest approach towards the subject. It touched my heart as well. Liked it.
    Amy-JayThankyou its a very personal poem which is probably why it seems honest, because it has integrity. glad you liked it! :)
  • EmmyC(: Love this! :)
    Amy-Jayglad you like it :)
  • DD124Hi im new here and I was wondering on how do u make stories
  • moomin98The message is conveyed so beautifully- seriously thought provoking stuff. The prose flows excellently and I can feel the message rolling off my tongue (hope that doesn't sound too weird!). Anyway, I love it. The last line slots in just perfectly with the last line of the first stanza. I'd like to offer some constructive criticism, but after multiple reads, I don't think that I can fault it... perhaps though, you could end the line at "mend that which I broke", making "But..." a new sentence. Just a suggestion, it's a matter of opinion concerning how you think that it should flow. But excellent stuff, I real love this style!!
    Amy-JaySo glad you like it and it does sound wierd but I know what you mean :)
    You mean put a full stop after broke and start the line 'but' as a new sentence? That could work, good suggestion :D
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