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Holding hands

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mrsgeorgeshelley
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    12 Jun 12
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Holding hands

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1. holding hands

there he is, over there,

so I stop to stand and stare.

is he smiling at me?

oh lord, how can this be?

 

holding hands with the one I love,

my special gift from above.

am I dreaming or am I not?

could this be part of a bullies plot?

he is the one I love!

my special gift sent down from above.

 

 

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  • mrsgeorgeshelleythanks for being honest
  • Annie.GA very sweet, touching poem! I like the realistic emotions you have portrayed really well in a believable voice. All that was missing was punctuation, punctuation, punctuation!

    "There he is, over there!
    So I stop to stand and stare.
    Is he smiling at me?
    Oh Lord, how can this be?

    Holding hands with the one I love:
    My special gift from above.
    Am dreaming or am I not?
    Could this be part of a Bully's plot?
    He is the one I love,
    My special gift sent down from above."

    That's just one way you could punctuate this! Play around, but simply punctuate it like you would with any piece of normal writing: like this comment I am making (for example!) Other than that, very sweet, easy flowing and polished poem! XD
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