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WOW:Blood Elves Power

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♥MiaFlora♥
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  • Published:
    28 May 12
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Blurb I am Starr.I am power.I am a blood elf and blood elves will rule the world.
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Fantasy
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Approx 7 minutes to read


WOW:Blood Elves Power

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1. Prologue

                                              We are the blood elves of the night.

                                          We will destroy all that come in our way,

                                                  We will fight for who we are,

                                                   power will come in our hand.

                                               we will KILL KILL FOR THE Night!

                                   for we are the blood elves and we will be victorious.

                               BEWARE OF US THE BLOOD ELVES WE WILL WIN AND KILL ALL! 

 

                                                 Starr

                                                Blood elf,Princess

 

 

”We are the Forsaken. We will slaughter anyone who stands in our way.”

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  • Bells HunterI've read the first chapter and I like the setting WOW and all that :) The atmosphere is royal and dark, sort of like in Eragon.
    The things you should be aware of are thoughts in the middle of the sentences, and not making the sentences too long. For example: We are grouped into different classes and given names my name is princess which means i have power next to the queen i am like royalty.
    Her names should be capitalized among a few things, and there should be a full stop somewhere in that sentence. You could proof read it, and you should stick too one tense.
    Overall, nicely done other than the small falws, but they are fixable. Hope this helped! :D Liked.
    Would you mind checking out my poem for the poetry comp? "Attempts of Poetry". Thanks :)
    ♥MiaFlora♥thank you
  • Wolfheartum did you know that blood elves and night elves are enamys im not trying to say that this was runbbish but i do play wow and its true they are enamy and also blood elves dont drink blood they drink mana from mana crystals but i know why you thought of it that was because of the name but other than that it was a fantastic story and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ♥MiaFlora♥thank you
  • IsabellaGirlI love it.
    This is a interesting story and i love it.Good luck in the comp and hope you place.You deserve it. Brilliant book.Just a few small mistakes.Otherwise brilliant.Good Luck
    ♥MiaFlora♥Thank you and ok
  • The PhantomThis is cool!!!
    Great read!:)
    Plz will you read my story Barricade and comment amd I hope to read more of your stories soon;)
    ♥MiaFlora♥Please could you click on like and fav if u wouldn't mind.If u do i will surely read yours
  • ♥MiaFlora♥I am thanking all the people who have read my story and cliked on like and fav.It really means alot to me and i thank you.If i won it be because of you.I really want to place and hope i stand a chance but i need your chance.Good luck to all who have entered.Hope i place.Please esupport me remember i'm only 12 so i will have mistakes.I'm only 12 so i won't write like a author.That is my dream to be a author.Hope you like my story "WoW:Blood Elves Power
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