WoW: The Night Of The Blood Elves!

by
XxJessxX
  • Published:
    25 May 12
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Blurb World Of Warcraft: The Night Of The Blood Elves Blizzard Productions The sky is dark and foggy with purple clouds striking each other in hatred, a storm is about to be born, Only it's the storm of the elves, Archers and the Night Elves are waiting for food to come by, as there camps and their supplies are limited, survival is the key to their Race. Nothing will be left as the Elves must get ready for the Ultimate Battle that will be a truly bloody display, Family & Friends they will loose, The risks of their survival is the riskiest risks of all time! Will they be able to take on all the other races through there terrible travels Find Out Now xxJessxx Blizzard World Of Warcraft Contest Entry. The Night Of The Blood Elves Cover Made By Jessica. Warning: This content may include, Blood & Violence & Deaths & Emotional sentences, Romance, Sex, Explicit language.
Approx 18 minutes to read


WoW: The Night Of The Blood Elves!

1. Prologue

Enchanted Bows In Our Hands Elves!

We Shall Fight For Our Race

We Will Never Loose Faith

Break Down The War Hammers

As Blood Smashes On The Ground We Walk On

Storm! Storm! Through The Night

Death Shall Win His Glory For Our Delight!

WE SHALL WIN AND KILL AND SLAUGHTER TO FIGHT!

 

- Night ELF Queen Of Night

 

Comments (29)

  • Fallen One It looks quite well. However, I would try and make the paragraphs a bit shorter, otherwise it becomes difficult to read.

    Another thing, try to avoid excessive reiteration of words, it can also get a bit tiring. Fortunately, english has lots of words that you can use instead of repeating the same one over and over again :)

    The descriptions are quite good, congratulations. I would like to read more of your work.

    If you could please take a look at my work "Return of the Reaper" and give me your opinion, I would be very very grateful.
  • amy and sakurathis is excellent! superb!
    amy and sakurayou've earned your well done
    XxJessxXThanks x <3
  • VeritasFunny, I just read this story but with another author behind it..... I like this version better though, even though the link to WOW is a little vague.
  • AstorethWere this a generic fantasy story, you'd have an interesting tale here, possibly worth a favorite. Unfortunately, as a supposed WoW story, it makes my poor little nerd brain hurt. Even if you don't play the game, there's a *wealth* of information and established history on the blood elves and night elves available on the other end of a quick Google search (including "how the blood elves came to be", which is nothing like your version), and it seems you used none of it. I am sorry if it seems that I'm harshing on your creative vibe, but the contest asks for a WoW story, and this just isn't one. Good luck to you anyway, and I will return to check out your other works.
    XxJessxXActually it is. Seriously...
    I'm not being harsh but It is a very old edition of it
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