Back to December
Blurb This is based on the song by Taylor Swift, but I added my experience in there. Cause I wish I could go back to December, but I know I can't. But all I can do, is wait. And hope that time heals the wounds.
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4ღℯℓ1ℯ ✰This is great! I love it in the second chapter when you describe about undoing the past. This story is an interesting idea and has lots of potential! The only thing I would say to improve is maybe put a bit more of her emotions into the writing like she would probably be sad when her mother died.:) Otherwise nice stuff! Please check out my movella If You Tell Anyone I'll Kill You. Thanks:D- 1 years ago
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Erica Zebra Bluewaterlol thanks, i'll have a look at your book. sounds like my kind of book :P- 1 years ago
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4ღℯℓ1ℯ ✰Aw thanks! I "liked" this by the way!:D- 1 years ago
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- XxJessxXThis isn't bad it's just short...
Is it a draft?- 1 years ago
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Erica Zebra Bluewaterthis isn't a draft, a lot of my writing is short, cause i write so many books. but im going to start writing longer chapters- 1 years ago
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Alice May Jones
