A Mother's Love

by
♥MiaFlora♥
  • Published:
    25 Apr 12
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Blurb Whitney Bell never actually got over the death of her daughter Vannessa Jo.After 4 years of the death Whitney starts to act like she has life when cleaning her attic finds a diary of her daughter which helps Whitney to remember her daughter but sometimes Whitney feels like her daughter is there but that is Mother's love.
Plot keywords:
love, diary, daughter, mom
Category:
Diary
Rating:
Approx 3 minutes to read


A Mother's Love

1. The Diary

Whitney glanced at the picture of her daughter Vannessa she looked so beautiful and she was only 14.Whitney still couldn't believe Vannessa would never come back.The house looked so lonely without her her lively and confident self.Oh Whitney missed her so much.Whitney sighed and opened the attic door dust was everywhere.Whitney looked around the attic it was full of stuff and could see a sparkling Book.Whitney walked to the diary and read the title.Vannessa Diary it read Whitney opened the diary.

Diary it is me Vannessa i have found out i am going to die i have cancer.I'm not afraid of death but i don't want to leave mom by herself.I can't tell my friends or my boyfriend.Diary when i die i wan't everyone to be happy.Noone to cry over the loss of my death.Death is luring at the corner waiting for me to fall so that it can grab me.Death feels like a scary place.I love my life i can't believe i am going to go to death i hope heaven waits for me and god is there.I want to ask him questions like "How old is he?","Will i be reincarnated".So many questions that fill my head.

Love.Vannessa

Whitney reluctantly wiped a tear from her face her daughter had known that she was going to die and still worried about her.She was full of life why did Death grab her daughter away from her and turned the next page there couldn't be any more secrets her daughter was hiding were there a tear fell from her face making the ink smudge. 

 

Comments (10)

  • Emma ZenithI like the concept and the plot of the story.It drew me in and i think it had great potentional you have worked on your spellings and grammar well done.Can't wait to see what you think of next.Lovely cover.
  • Diego<3It's good that you never give up Mia because if you keep trying and focusing on grammar (cause I just love your story ideas) you will go far
    ♥MiaFlora♥Ok i will change that please support me it would be a dream if i won.Please god help me.
    Diego<3I am helping you lots ok... I think you could win cause the idea is great ;)
    Diego<3add full stop after Whitney wiped a tear from her face. Also... for 'turned the next page.' Put a full stop before that, no and before that either XD and and put 'As Whitney reluctantly turned the next page, hoping that their weren't any more secrets her daughter was hiding, a tear fell onto the page, making the ink smudge.'
    ♥MiaFlora♥Thank you i have changed it do you like it cause i want it best as possible so i have the best chance of placing.Crossing my fingers,praying god make this dream come true.
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