Diary of Samantha Meek

by
BlueBloods
  • Published:
    5 Apr 12
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Blurb Okay first of this is a diary version of Warflight so every chapter in this diary will be posted after the chapters in the story version.
Plot keywords:
diary, war
Category:
Diary
Rating:
Approx 2 minutes to read


Diary of Samantha Meek

1. 17th January 1939

17th January 1939

 

A war broke out today. Arthur and I helped our mother and siblings escape when the German owls attacked. We reached The Great Owl Tree which is the heart of owl kind, there were many more owls there many were injured. I overheard the army, I heard them say they were low on soldiers as many had died and soon the Enemy would attack here and there would be no where else to go. I realized that my family were in danger. I knew I had to do something, I had joined the army. We were soon informed that the German had trapped us in, meaning that everywhere around us had been attacked. Realization hit  me and I soon began to notice that there was no happiness but sadness everywhere you turned to look. Why? I just didn't understand who could do such things. They army had to leave the same day as I came to the Owl Tree. Arthur wanted to come but I knew mother and my siblings couldn't survive without either one of us. I told him to stay and look after them and he did. Before I left his words were the last I heard from my family. He told me if I did not survive this war than he will not stop till they returned what they took and he won't stop until the mission has been fulfilled. I nodded and that's when I left for war.

 

Not long after we were ambushed by the enemy. A few died, many injured but we managed to pull through. We set camp at a old rotten Anderson Shelter. Not long after were we once again attacked by pack rats. I received a few scratches nothing serious. I found this diary under some wooden boards where the rats appeared from and that's how I found this. It already had a few notes in but they weren't much use. Though for some reason I had a feeling it was important but I am certain it's just me being cautious. Oh well, but I got to stop writing as I want to ration the pages. I hope my family are safe and that they come to no harm.

 

Comments (12)

  • Eclecticboy NMD SurvivorAre u writing any more?

    P.S. have u read 'death goes on holiday' yet?
    BlueBloodsI'm going to write more and yeah I've read Death goes on Holiday. I've been busy lately (mainly because I'm grounded not any more though) so I haven't had a chance to write anything.

    Hope u have a nice holiday while it lasts :P
  • aka24this is really gd
    i luv it
    if u hve time cn u read my movella `blossom queen`
    BlueBloodsThanks and sure I'll take a look
  • Eclecticboy NMD SurvivorThis is a bit weird but cool (I hope the owl dies)
    Eclecticboy NMD SurvivorNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ! ! ! !
    BlueBloodsLOL! ;D
    Eclecticboy NMD SurvivorIT'S NOT FUNNY!!! (Sob, sob, wimper)
    BlueBloodsI'm not really or maybe I could :)
  • WhitmanA war diary is a great idea and the owl twist makes it more unique. The main thing I would say at this stage is choose carefully what you gloss over. You narrated away two action scenes in four sentences, which if detailed would make this a lot more exciting, especially as the narrator seems new to battle. 'Guardians of Ga'Hoole' or the Redwall series should give you some ideas for battle sequences. I think if you work at choosing what to describe in detail and plan out a rough story arc, chapter by chapter (or entry by entry), you should stand a really good chance of winning one of those headsets, as there won't be many entries similar to yours. Good luck!
    BlueBloodsActually I never thought of entering this in the competition. Thanks for the advice and the second paragraph is meant to be like that because it's supposed to be a brief spoiler for what is going to happen in Chapter 2 of Warflight.
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